Rejected Tour De Corse - Insane

[Cashisgr8]

-Cashisgr8
-Tour De Corse

Spoiler: Pictures (shaders pics from BDOsborne)

http://imgur.com/a/7HyTSec

http://imgur.com/a/54Aw6z1

/plot v Cashisgr8 6

-97 Jumps 8 Checkpoints

It's a bit harder for an Insane, but I try to teach all the important jumps

Edit: The embeds for screenshots may not work, the imgur link will work though


After like 5 edits to try and get pictures to work, i think this is the best it will be. The Imgur embeds have all of BDOsborne's cool shader screenshots

 

[BluePottwal]

This looks like /log valley with a car instead of the river lol:-)

 

[49ersDude]

fine i removed it

 

[Quinny]

Hello Cashisgr8,

I will be putting this map into Ongoing. This means your map has been reviewed by a primary judge, and is ready to be discussed among the rest of the map judging team. Please be patient with us during this process, as it can take a few days for us to come to a final decision on your map.

If you have questions in the meantime, feel free to message me on Discord at Quinny#2316.

 

[Quinny]

Hey again Cash,

I am sorry to inform you this map is being rejected. The theme is not very original, there are other valley and cliffscape maps as well as other car maps already on ManaCube. The build is very aesthetically similar to many maps as well. However, this map is not textured and terraformed with as much intention as maps that are already on the server. The texture for most components is heavily worldedited and randomized, as well as the vines and trees looking unpolished and brushed out. There are also issues with scale, the car is massive to the cliffsides and looks very odd. The car is also a bit boxy.

The parkour is okay, it is relatively fun to play and the more difficult jumps are well explained. It is also mixed and varied, and the path is easy to follow. The build and theme the main problem with this map overall.

Thanks for submitting this map! If you have questions, feel free to message me on Discord. Hope to see more maps from you soon!