Accepted Traffic Light PK- a hard map

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Myself (SoccerChicken50) and my friend (Minester1234) made this together at my plot (ID: -95;-11). It has 6 checkpoints with 61 jumps. We hope you all like it. Thanks
 

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Ok. Firstly, you need to include pictures of your map. I think the map looks pretty good (albeit a bit simple) but others won't know what it looks like. On to my actual opinions:

Theme: the theme is good. I don't know of any traffic light maps, so good job.

Build: The build is nice. I think the shape and proportions are good, but the block variety is a little bit lacking. I think mixing in other black blocks like coal blocks and obsidian into the black wool would make the map much better looking. You can do this with worldedit using this command: //replace 35:15 33%35:15,33%49,34%173 . Also, change the heads and fences in the build to a lighter color, they are really hard to see and ruin the experience a little.

PK: The pk is good. My only problem is it feels a little easy for hard, as well as there being few checkpoints. If you added 1-2 more checkpoints and made the jumps harder, the map would feel much better. Other than that, there is good variation and the length fits the difficulty.

Overall, I think the map is pretty good. Some polishing could be done, but that's just my opinion.
 

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Ok. Firstly, you need to include pictures of your map. I think the map looks pretty good (albeit a bit simple) but others won't know what it looks like. On to my actual opinions:

Theme: the theme is good. I don't know of any traffic light maps, so good job.

Build: The build is nice. I think the shape and proportions are good, but the block variety is a little bit lacking. I think mixing in other black blocks like coal blocks and obsidian into the black wool would make the map much better looking. You can do this with worldedit using this command: //replace 35:15 33%35:15,33%49,34%173 . Also, change the heads and fences in the build to a lighter color, they are really hard to see and ruin the experience a little.

PK: The pk is good. My only problem is it feels a little easy for hard, as well as there being few checkpoints. If you added 1-2 more checkpoints and made the jumps harder, the map would feel much better. Other than that, there is good variation and the length fits the difficulty.

Overall, I think the map is pretty good. Some polishing could be done, but that's just my opinion.
Hi, thanks for the feedback. As you were looking at the map, I realised I had forgotten to add the photos- sorry about that.
We’ve just gone through and made changes to the map, we’ve changed up the block pallets with the black wool and changed the heads and fences.
Weve also added more difficult parkour and some more checkpoint. Thanks for the feedback
 

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Hello SoccerChicken50 and Minester1234,

I am happy to inform you that your map is being accepted!
The theme is original, as we currently don't have any maps relating to a traffic light, so good job on that!
The build is accurate to what you were going for, and there is a decent amount of block variety to be seen. I can tell that a lot of effort went into this map!
The parkour is
varied throughout, and it is incorporated with the theme quite nicely! The length of the course and difficulty of the jumps both fit the hard difficulty quite nicely!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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