Rejected Tram - Hard

[BlackBird552]

For around 6 years I've had a fascination with trams. Kind of a weird hobby, but I still enjoy watching and learning about them. The model seen in the screenshots is a Pesa 120 NaG. The build may come a bit squishy and imperfect, but I myself find it satisfying by itself.

Nickname: BlackBird552
Map Name: "Tram"
The Plot: -81;-92
Difficulty: Hard
Images: Linked below.
Jumps: 72 Counted (With slime jumps 75)

 

[Mr_DagALkeef_B7]

Good luck!

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello,

Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED.
The theme is original, so good job on that!

The build itself can do with some shaping and detailing. Looking at your reference photo, things such as the front and the space where the first/second carriage join together needs to be changed. In addition, the colour palette of this build needs to be changed; the white concrete does not suit the reference photo well.

The parkour does fit the length and difficulty for the most part; however, there were points of the parkour where the parkour fell repetitive and uncreative. In addition, the pathing of the parkour could do with some improvement. I would suggest building an interior so you can path your parkour into that too.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley