Rejected Trampoline Park - Expert

[CrazyTownKid]

Map Name: Trampoline Park
Map Creator: CrazyTownKid
Map Location: /plot v CrazyTownKid 2
Map Difficulty: Expert or Hard
Jump Amount: 65
Checkpoint Amount: 4 + the one at the entrance

Some parts are confusing so click here for vid of the parkour

 

[Acrellux]

Parkour looks repetitive with just fences and ladders and blocks

 

[CrazyTownKid]

Parkour looks repetitive with just fences and ladders and blocks

kind of but there's some other parkour you don't notice from the images.

 

[samsei]

floating parkour can look a bit weird - maybe try connecting it to a main build? (like add a floor or something) good luck! :D

 

[CrazyTownKid]

floating parkour can look a bit weird - maybe try connecting it to a main build? (like add a floor or something) good luck! :D

ill try if they ask me to

 

[k_rissy]

Hello CrazyTownKid,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme of your map is unoriginal, as we already have Slime and Trampoline themed maps (Trampoline, SlimePK, SlimeBouncer). I recommend checking out the full list of accepted maps here [ https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/] to ensure your theme is original!
The build of your parkour is accurate to that of the slime mob, and accurate to trampolines. However, I recommend creating something with more depth and detail, try enlarging the build and adding more color variation to assist with this!
The parkour of your map fits the hard difficulty, so good job on this! The parkour is also fairly varied, however you've used the same jumps in "sections", try to space out different blocks so the jumps don't become consistently repetitive. The jumps are also confusing, add some navigation through signs so the players know where to jump to! Finally, the parkour is mainly floating (meaning it isn't attached to the build) which can make it look messy![Jash]

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina