Rejected Tutorial Map

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My user is MCRoyalty1
I think this plot's difficulty is either medium or hard (there are 6 neos in a row)
The name of the map is Tutorial. It has 100 jumps and 4 checkpoints
you can get to the plot by /plot visit MCRoyalty1
 

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Wizful

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I think the parkour jumps are well designed, but the theme could use some work. If I were you, I would look for some inspiration, and incorporate the jumps into a well themed build.

Good luck,
- Wizful
 

Appledestroyer

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Its a hard map for me but the problem is that its not to decorated and its really lacks in designs.I had an idea like this but changed my map because i probably can`t make a great design.Also since the map judge takes quite along time to judge,try putting decorations.The ideas is original but even if an idea is original,it might not be good.Also what tutorial map is on hard?The jumps are really not original at all.
Overall:24/50
Originality:8/10
Design:3/10
Jumps creativity:3/10
Build:5/10
My Opinion:5/10
If you did not know this map might be expert because Ocean Waves was easier
 

Txilsy

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Hellos,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

When building a map, make sure to have a theme represented by a well-build structure. Do pick an original theme however, avoid using ones that have been before. You have a few signs of variety, which I’d be happy to see again on other maps in the future. For now, I’d advise you to look at mainly the newly added maps (close to the end of each lane) and look at how they built it. Take some inspiration from there and I am sure you will be able to come up with something splendid.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one. :)
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.

Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/
 
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