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- Thread starter maffacool912
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Here are pros and cons of what I think:
Pros:
- Assuming this is an easy course, it has an appropriate amount of jumps and an appropriate difficulty of jumps
- The quality of the builds are OK, and not blocky
- The theme is probably used, but it's not overly used like the Mario theme is, the only map I can think of that has airplanes off the top of my head is the medium course with aircrafts
Cons:
- The jumps are a bit repetitive
- There's a pretty big shortcut, instead of going through the plane, you can jump over it and onto the next one below
- You can get stuck in the cockpit after you climb down the ladder
Screenshot of shortcut:
Pros:
- Assuming this is an easy course, it has an appropriate amount of jumps and an appropriate difficulty of jumps
- The quality of the builds are OK, and not blocky
- The theme is probably used, but it's not overly used like the Mario theme is, the only map I can think of that has airplanes off the top of my head is the medium course with aircrafts
Cons:
- The jumps are a bit repetitive
- There's a pretty big shortcut, instead of going through the plane, you can jump over it and onto the next one below
- You can get stuck in the cockpit after you climb down the ladder
Screenshot of shortcut:
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Here's your second review from me c:
Pros:
- You changed the plane to a rocket which gives the course a little more variety
- The jumps inside the rocket are great, they're different and a little harder than the other ones
- The shortcuts were fixed
- The only way to get stuck in the cockpit now is if you actually try to (because the ladder that led straight into it was removed)
Cons:
- Sorry to say, the quality of the rocket isn't too good :/
- The jumps at the end are still repetitive
- The first plane is way to small to fit parkour and has only ladder jumps (I'd suggest making it a little wider and add block pk and more)
- When you go on the rocket the directions of where to go next aren't clear... even though I see a huge bedrock & slime thing at the bottom, other people won't be too observant of this.. maybe put a sign there?
Just a few more tweaks and you got this man!
Pros:
- You changed the plane to a rocket which gives the course a little more variety
- The jumps inside the rocket are great, they're different and a little harder than the other ones
- The shortcuts were fixed
- The only way to get stuck in the cockpit now is if you actually try to (because the ladder that led straight into it was removed)
Cons:
- Sorry to say, the quality of the rocket isn't too good :/
- The jumps at the end are still repetitive
- The first plane is way to small to fit parkour and has only ladder jumps (I'd suggest making it a little wider and add block pk and more)
- When you go on the rocket the directions of where to go next aren't clear... even though I see a huge bedrock & slime thing at the bottom, other people won't be too observant of this.. maybe put a sign there?
Just a few more tweaks and you got this man!
Hello maffacool,
Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.
Points that influenced the decision:
- The theme of the map is original, but it does look like a plane theme, which is a bit more common.
- The build is simple and as it should, it does look like a plane. But that also is the problem, it doesn't quite look like the USS Enterprise but instead looks like a regular plane. Which also doesn't look the greatest. I'd suggest picking either an easier theme to fit a build with or look and compare your build with an actual picture for reference.
- The jumps are decent, though I'd say to add more variety regardless. At the moment, I'd say it is an easy map due to the types of jumps. Also, I don't see how you get from the bottom part to the last bit of the parkour. You might've missed some blocks there. There's also a ton of barriers, which do not really block the exploit. Next time, make your parkour going upwards, rather than down, so the chance of there being exploits is smaller.
- The length would fit easy/medium difficulty, though the jumps aren't medium worthy yet.
Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one. :)
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.
Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.
Points that influenced the decision:
- The theme of the map is original, but it does look like a plane theme, which is a bit more common.
- The build is simple and as it should, it does look like a plane. But that also is the problem, it doesn't quite look like the USS Enterprise but instead looks like a regular plane. Which also doesn't look the greatest. I'd suggest picking either an easier theme to fit a build with or look and compare your build with an actual picture for reference.
- The jumps are decent, though I'd say to add more variety regardless. At the moment, I'd say it is an easy map due to the types of jumps. Also, I don't see how you get from the bottom part to the last bit of the parkour. You might've missed some blocks there. There's also a ton of barriers, which do not really block the exploit. Next time, make your parkour going upwards, rather than down, so the chance of there being exploits is smaller.
- The length would fit easy/medium difficulty, though the jumps aren't medium worthy yet.
Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one. :)
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.
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