Rejected Washing Machine - Medium

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_TreeBark_

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Builder: _TreeBark_
Testers: FrenchKnife, Aztec_, BluePottwal, and lilfeetpics
Plot: /plot v _TreeBark_ 7
Difficulty: Medium
Number of Checkpoints: 2
Number of Jumps: Around 42
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Maybe add on a handle to the gray part. This is where my washing machine handle is anyway lol
 

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Hello _TreeBark_,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is slightly unoriginal, as we already have a laundry-related map (Laundry.) However, we currently do not have any maps that only focus on a washing machine, so good job on that!
The build is decently accurate to what you were going for. However, the build feels a bit cramped, so I recommend making it bigger, and also giving it more shape. I also agree with Pres' comment that it could use more block variety.
The parkour is varied throughout, so good job on that! It is floating a bit, particularly in the beginning (meaning it isn't attached to the build) which can make it appear messy. The parkour is also a bit confusing, so try to have a more direct path. The length of the course and difficulty of the jumps both fit the medium difficulty quite nicely!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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