Rejected Woodlands - Easy

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My first parkour map. It's pretty easy, I'd say border between easy/medium.

It simply starts off with a few jumps, then you enter the mine where you have to do 2 head hitter jumps and finally, you have to enter the house to jump in a hole and do some simple ore jumps to end it off with diamonds.

It isn't themed amazingly, but it's still a pretty good map IMO

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Hello Piiiiiizza,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have maps relating to trees/nature, as well as the floating islands concept, which is very unoriginal. The ending parkour is also very similar to a map we already have (Rythm.)
The build is a bit plain. I believe there could be more detail on the house, like windows or other cute little decorations. The islands could also use some more decoration.
The parkour is quite repetitive with the use of straightforward jumps. Try using different types of jumps. You can look at recently accepted maps for some examples of these. However, your parkour is incorporated with the build, and it does fit the difficulty, so good job on that!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,

Kristina
 
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