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The parkour is pretty repetitive, so try adding jumps like fences, ice, soul sand, heads, etc. It's got a pretty good difficulty and length, though.
The build could be improved quite a bit, in my opinion. Try shaping the dirt into actual islands, and maybe make the trees a bit more custom; change the colors, the blocks for the leaves, chisel them so they aren't perfect rectangles, etc.
The theme has been done before as well; in fact, I believe floating islands are the most commonly used theme on the server. Generally, unless you have a very good parkour/build, an unoriginal theme isn't likely to be accepted. Just a heads up for your next map. You can use Shinx's parkour list (seen below in my signature) to check what themes have been done!
Good luck!
The build could be improved quite a bit, in my opinion. Try shaping the dirt into actual islands, and maybe make the trees a bit more custom; change the colors, the blocks for the leaves, chisel them so they aren't perfect rectangles, etc.
The theme has been done before as well; in fact, I believe floating islands are the most commonly used theme on the server. Generally, unless you have a very good parkour/build, an unoriginal theme isn't likely to be accepted. Just a heads up for your next map. You can use Shinx's parkour list (seen below in my signature) to check what themes have been done!
Good luck!
Hey Brzoza222,
I'm sorry to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED. The theme is not very original, as there are multiple forest (woods), tree, and floating islands map. Furthermore, the theme is not really detectable or conveyed in the build as it's just floating parkour with a couple of trees here and there. You should really try to make it so the theme is quite apparent in your build. The build is not very attractive due to it being mostly floating and lacking in detail. The PK length and difficulty definitely fit the medium difficulty (with an exception of 1 or 2 jumps which were a little harder). The main issues with the PK is the variation and floating aspect of it. It was a very straightforward parkour with minimal variation in the jumps (comprised of block to block jumps with a ladder or two here and there). You should really make your parkour as varied as possible so it is enjoyable and not repetitive. Still, definitely hope to see more map submissions from you!
I'm sorry to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED. The theme is not very original, as there are multiple forest (woods), tree, and floating islands map. Furthermore, the theme is not really detectable or conveyed in the build as it's just floating parkour with a couple of trees here and there. You should really try to make it so the theme is quite apparent in your build. The build is not very attractive due to it being mostly floating and lacking in detail. The PK length and difficulty definitely fit the medium difficulty (with an exception of 1 or 2 jumps which were a little harder). The main issues with the PK is the variation and floating aspect of it. It was a very straightforward parkour with minimal variation in the jumps (comprised of block to block jumps with a ladder or two here and there). You should really make your parkour as varied as possible so it is enjoyable and not repetitive. Still, definitely hope to see more map submissions from you!
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