oki time to do the talking about my opinion thingy
Theme: Its original enough. There are already some star wars maps, but none about x-wings so good job on being original (i wish i could dso that)
Build: Eh. It's okay. It feels really simple, but I can't quite put my finger on it. I think it's the x-wings themselves; they look very simple and also copy-pasted. It could also be the lack of action, but that's an advanced building thing that is oki if u can't do.
PK: Some things to say here. First, the # of jumps dictates this map is medium difficulty (why I asked u to change the green wool to yellow). However, the pk feels too easy for medium. I would buff the pk. Second, there isn't much variety in the jumps. Try using things like heads and vines and water and pistons and enchantment tables and such.
Basically: add some WOW and TASTE and HUZZAH to the build and also buff and add variety to the pk. If u do that, this will probably be accepted. oki thx for reading bye :)