Hello, I already told you ingame, but I'm gonna summarize it again for the forums:
I don't think this map is very good.
The build looks really bland and boring, eventhough some new Xbox apearently looks like this.
I'd rather model this after a Xbox 360 or Xbox 1:
They are much easier to identify and there's much more details to be added. (It's also not just a big cube.)
Your parkour also wasn't great.
It was basically a lot of jumps that would fit medium/hard maps with some annoying expert/insane jumps at the start and end of a cp.
There was a section entirely made up of ice+soulsand jumps, which just sucks and takes forever. Especially since you won't get the ladder jump first try.
The random triple and the double neup at the end of the map also don't make it any better.
All in all I would rebuild the map so it's easier to identify and redo the parkour.
I don't think making insane parkour for the sake of beeing annoying and hard is fun for many people on this server.