Rejected Yummi - Expert

[ThomasHyper]

Yummi!!!!!
63 Jumps
8 Checkpoints
/Plot v ThomasHyper 15
Solo map

 

[relishbb]

+1 i like tha parkour i think its very suitable for an expert map and i hope it gets accepyed

 

[disableduser335534]

+1
I like the 'uniqueness' of the cat building, it's very eye-catching. and seems like a fun map.
Good luck!

 

[Shinxray]

Hey ThomasHyper,
Sorry to tell you that your map has been rejected.
The theme is fine, the build needs some improvement, like on Zed it needs polishing a bit everywhere, the head also need a rework, it looks very flatten.

Spoiler: Build issues example

wack feet (both)

random floating blocks

flat head

only examples, the whole build needs to more smooth and less world edited

The parkour also needs improvement, it's a bit better than Zed, but it's not very good, the pathing is okay but could be better on the 2nd half (like the parkour on the floating glass are not needed imo). The parkour felt quite annoying to play too, I will give some examples after but in my opinion it needs a global rework, I also think the map is a bit hard for an expert on some parts, but it's too short for an insane.

Spoiler: some very bad jumps

only examples, there is more annoying stuff like annoying ceiling jumps, the random door glitch or the neos into cobblewalls

Thanks for submitting your map.