Rejected Farmlands by Kuume

[Kuume]

• Username = Kuume
• Map name = Farmlands
• Photos of your Parkour
  
  
• Plot ID = -75;-52
• Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane) I'd say hard or expert
• Number of jumps (Optional) Around 95

 

[Kuume]

Ps the coming soon sign in the map is because i didnt want to make the map wider since the format said not to make it too wide and it wont actually wont come soon since it was just because i wanted to make the map bigger but nah so dont expect me to update the map

 

[Presidenten]

-1 from me
Theme is kind of unoriginal, a barn and windmill map already exist
The build is floating islands, which is one of the most generic ways to make a build
Parkour is pretty repetitive and floating alot, you should have made parkour on the builds instead.
Good luck though!

 

[Kuume]

-1 It's my first map and i haven't really played on the server alot so i didn't know sorry ;(

 

[Presidenten]

Don't worry, take a look at how the newest maps are made and try to adapt from them.
If you want to check if a theme is used, use this!

 

[Kuume]

Don't worry, take a look at how the newest maps are made and try to adapt from them.
If you want to check if a theme is used, use this!

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Any way to search from there?

 

[MCBYT]

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Any way to search from there?

Hold Ctrl (bottom left and right of keyboard) and the F key. If you do it correctly, a search bar will pop up at the top. You can also view maps by name, difficulty, creator, or theme.

 

[Jameslancaster]

-0.5 it is nicely built however it is very unoriginal and plane idk what it needs its just missing something the parkour is also not varied in which it should be otherwise the parkour just gets boring but i wish u the best of luck

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Kuume,

Unfortunately I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are already farm themed maps, as well as floating island themed maps. In the future, please read over the document in this thread https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map theme isn't overused. The build however, is good.
The parkour doesn't have much variety. There were a lot of repetitive sections. In the future, try to experiment with different blocks and items when building jumps, it makes the parkour a lot more enjoyable to complete. Try to avoid grouping jumps as well, what I mean by this, is that there were a few sections that were just blocks of ice, or just fences, having this repetitiveness can make the map seem boring.
The parkour is around a medium difficulty, and the length would be more suited to an expert, I'd suggest reading this thread https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ to familiarise yourself with the map building & submission guidelines.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.