@The_Jazzy_Man , no need to criticize! Just point out the pros and cons! It's about proper judgement if you want to give them solid advice, but I do agree that the information you listed needs to be edited into the post. I can see that it is an easy parkour, but I don't know how many jumps or checkpoints there are. Also, I found you gave incorrect information about it's location, as it's located at
/plot visit gumleaf 2 and not 3!
Pros:
- The theme is nice, it really flows, and the scenery is nice!
- The parkour jumps are perfect for learning diagonal jumps for later parkourses!
- Your choice of blocks was good, and was seamless with the other jumps and scenery.
Cons:
- The parkour was extremely short, and a little bit TOO easy; this could further be exploited and beaten 5 times rather than completing a single hard course for 50 gems!
- There are only 22 jumps, and no variety in between them, although this is easy, at least one section should follow a different style of parkour to make it a little more challenging for the user!
- There are too many checkpoints, you have 3 checkpoints between only 22 jumps, which makes this parkour more easily completed and exploitable for the sole purpose of getting free gems.
Here's my advice: try making the course a little bit harder, and extend the parkour to have more jumps, and some more variety to it, such as: ladders, fences, or even one hard jump in the course! Keep the theme, it looks great! I'm not sure if there is already a rainbow parkour already on the Easy courses though. Keep working on it, make it more suitable for the Easy difficulty so it's not too easy!
I'm not a parkour course reviewer, but I wanted to give you this advice!
I'll see you out on the parkourses,
SwiftLee