Rejected Friendly Tree || Hard or medium

[LovelyLing]

My username is Liingling my map title is Friendly Tree plot #2 I think the difficulty is a hard or medium map I cannot decide, and it has about 70 jumps.

 

[Anthony (ft18m)]

Hello Dancyspoon123, I just went and checked out the map. Overall, out of ten, I'd probably rate it ~6. The idea is original and fun. However, I would try to vary up the different types of jumps other than fences and ladders. Also, I would freshen up the trees by adding some texture, different blocks, etc. Keep up the good work, you're on to something! :D

 

[LovelyLing]

Hello Dancyspoon123, I just went and checked out the map. Overall, out of ten, I'd probably rate it ~6. The idea is original and fun. However, I would try to vary up the different types of jumps other than fences and ladders. Also, I would freshen up the trees by adding some texture, different blocks, etc. Keep up the good work, you're on to something! :D

Thank you so much! I appreciate you looking and taking time to! I’ll try my best to put some variety in it!

 

[LovelyLing]

Hello Dancyspoon123, I just went and checked out the map. Overall, out of ten, I'd probably rate it ~6. The idea is original and fun. However, I would try to vary up the different types of jumps other than fences and ladders. Also, I would freshen up the trees by adding some texture, different blocks, etc. Keep up the good work, you're on to something! :D

Also when I’m finished, how do I resubmit my changes?

 

[maddiemaid]

a problem i immediately notice is the theme. there are already a ton of tree or forest related maps out there

 

[ThePKFish]

Hello Liingling,

I am here to inform you that this course is being rejected. The theme is unoriginal, since we already have plenty of tree maps. See this link to check if your theme is original: https://www.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ . The build is a little awkward. It represents a tree but needs some improvement. The leaves and build could overall be more realistic, with the leaves being wider and more spread out and a thinner trunk for the height of the tree. The parkour is quite repetitive and it also doesn't fit into a difficulty. It is much too long for a medium but much too easy for a hard. Overall, the theme could be improved, the build needs improvement, and the parkour could be less repetitive and more clear when it comes to the difficulty.

Thank you for submitting this map!
If you have any questions, you may DM me on here, in game, or on discord!

-Ashley (ThePKFish, fishy1980)