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Loading Status...Rejected 50's diner parkour (FIXED)
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A diner is either a person, a restaurant, or a train car. Dinner is either a meal or a gathering around food. Therefore, if you’re referring to a person or place, diner is the correct word. To describe a meal or an event, you would want to use dinner, instead. Well i guess u are right all of that at the top was copied and pasted
Hey 49ersDude, poparmy and Acid_Reflvx!,
in my opinion, you have not used the opportunity this wonderful theme brings. I think your build is kind of boring and often lacks of good shape, as it looks like a sort of square what needs more detail.
The parkour is boring but it fits in the medium difficulty. But at some parts it's not really attached to the building what makes it look like it's messed up.
The line of fences on the picture above just doesn't fit to the building,
You should try avoiding the use of loads of barriers, because it just messes up the parkour and confuses players.
Especially this part was very confusing for me what doesn't make your map fun to play.
But I wish you three good luck with your map, and I hope you have a nice day/night!
Best regards,
Mika
in my opinion, you have not used the opportunity this wonderful theme brings. I think your build is kind of boring and often lacks of good shape, as it looks like a sort of square what needs more detail.
The parkour is boring but it fits in the medium difficulty. But at some parts it's not really attached to the building what makes it look like it's messed up.
The line of fences on the picture above just doesn't fit to the building,
You should try avoiding the use of loads of barriers, because it just messes up the parkour and confuses players.
Especially this part was very confusing for me what doesn't make your map fun to play.
But I wish you three good luck with your map, and I hope you have a nice day/night!
Best regards,
Mika
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