Rejected Lauk Lair

[Lauk]

Hey, my last map was pretty bad. The only thing it had going for it was style, and how nice it looked.
Therefore, I started from scratch and completely killed everything that made my last stage bad, and kept what made it good.
Username: LaukNLoad
An entire video presenting my build:

Plot: /plot goto LaukNLoad 2
31;37
Difficulty: Medium
My disadvantage I notice is that the difficulty of jumps doesn't really match the length. If needed, I will change the map so it's longer and I will up the difficulty to expert or hard.
I'm also going to keep submitting maps until I get the rank. I think I will deserve it eventually.

 

[Louiehee]

Tbh with the building it looks alright until you look at the roof, then im like where is it, so somehow add a roof or something.

 

[Blurpyfied]

Looks good but it might not get accepted BECAUSE it has so much quartz and very very very little detail added to it.

 

[Lauk]

Tbh with the building it looks alright until you look at the roof, then im like where is it, so somehow add a roof or something.

tell me from what angle do you see the roof in adventure mode

 

[GoldenGaming]

Heyo, the detail in the architecture is great. There's not floating blocks from what I can tell. The depth of field was amazing. However, you had only used three-four blocks for an entire build that looks like it took 10,000+ blocks to make. There is a lot of room for testing/using different blocks. Find good contrasts. Ya know? Good luckio mah dud.

-Golden (The Chicken)

 

[Lauk]

Heyo, the detail in the architecture is great. There's not floating blocks from what I can tell. The depth of field was amazing. However, you had only used three-four blocks for an entire build that looks like it took 10,000+ blocks to make. There is a lot of room for testing/using different blocks. Find good contrasts. Ya know? Good luckio mah dud.

-Golden (The Chicken)

Thanks, im still decently new to making parkour.

 

[Lauk]

Looks good but it might not get accepted BECAUSE it has so much quartz and very very very little detail added to it.

I don't know how to respond to this. I would say you're incorrect in most ways but I guess that's your opinion?

(lowkey it's really funny hearing those words from you)

 

[Louiehee]

tell me from what angle do you see the roof in adventure mode

Well if you are looking from below which it seems you will be, it looks like nothing is there

 

[Lauk]

Well if you are looking from below which it seems you will be, it looks like nothing is there

just what i was going for

 

[Shron]

Hey Lauk,
I am sorry to tell you, but I am going to reject this map.
It does not look too appealing from the outside and really empty on the inside. I do not see a real theme in this and it is way too long for a medium map. Also 1 jump is harder , than the medium difficulty for sure.
When building a parkour map, try to keep the build and the length of the course to the difficulty (For example a smaller build for an easier difficulty; a bigger build and longer course for insane/expert). Also try to detail insides of rooms/houses/caves etc. so make it look more appealing for players. Also add more variety to jumps, so it is also more fun.
Thanks for submitting this course and I hope to see more in the future!

Shron