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+0. The theme is somewhat original; as you know, there's already a few other fast food maps. As piebrian5 mentioned, the inside is very cramped and cluttered. The build isn't horrible, but I suggest using clay instead of wool. It looks too bright and contrasting to me. Good luck!

+1. I know there are other aquatic/fish-themed maps, but I absolutely love this build and the parkour is great too. Good luck!

There already are hands, they're in fists though so hard to see.

-1. These clouds are poorly shaped, and the massive white wall looks very unattractive. The parkour is also highly repetitive, and the theme of clouds has been used many times before.

-1. The build is plain, the parkour is repetitive, and the theme isn't really there; I get there's two paths, but this hasn't been executed very well, and there are many other maps that have incorporated multiple paths better.

+0.5. Not a horrible build, decently varied, and mostly original. There's a few somewhat similar maps, but I like this one a lot personally. Good luck!

Going to be my biggest map yet, so it's a bit of a learning experience. In my opinion, the face (mouth/hair mainly) and arms need a bit of work. If you agree, disagree, or have any other points, please do tell. (ignore the clay bits at the bottom/top, they're for copy/pasting) ./plot h mcbyt...

I think the theme of a black hole could be really awesome, but at least in my opinion, this isn't the way to do it. As mentioned, floating islands are common, but I saw that you noticed, so I won't bother you about that. As for the parkour, try making the jumps a bit more varied; it's not...

I'll review the parkour when I get back home, but the build looks much better. +1!

+1. Parkour has definitely improved since last time, and theme is still original, but please for the love of god make the roller coaster wider my brain will explode if you don't

The parkour is pretty repetitive, so try adding jumps like fences, ice, soul sand, heads, etc. It's got a pretty good difficulty and length, though. The build could be improved quite a bit, in my opinion. Try shaping the dirt into actual islands, and maybe make the trees a bit more custom...

As mentioned in-game, good build, good theme, but definitely too hard for a hard. Suggested either removing jumps/nerfing or just renaming as an expert (preferably the latter)

+0.75. Nice build, could probably be improved with a table but not a big deal as you have the tablecloth. Theme is mostly original as well, there are some food maps and table maps (even some combining them) but this one looks significantly different. Remove/nerf the slime jump on top, that...

Spruce it up a bit, then! You've got plenty of other types of blocks to build with.

+0.5. The parkour is pretty much perfect imo, in terms of length/difficulty/variety. The theme is definitely original (which I'm honestly surprised at, would've expected at least one vampire/Dracula map by now but I guess not). The build is kinda "eh" though, at least in my opinion. It just...

The AFK timer is there to prevent system resources from being unnecessarily taken up, as well as to drive players towards the store which is how they are able to keep the server up. You could always actually be there, or just buy VIP which is honestly rather cheap.

+0.5. The theme is mostly original, as far as I'm aware (TacoBell was recently submitted [and rejected] and there's a KFC map submitted currently, as well as Starbucks having been accepted). The parkour is a good length and difficulty (the ladders in the middle of the inside might be a bit...

-0.5. As it is, the parkour is very confusing. A few signs would be helpful, it took me like 20 seconds just to find the start. As Tasses mentioned, there's quite a few normal jumps as well. You can try to diversify these with ice, soul sand, fences, walls, snow, heads, gates, trapdoors, etc...