Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed among map judges. This may take time, so please be patient.
The build has improved significantly from your previous submission. However, it's been requested that you redo the clouds to make them look more realistic. The texturing on the wings also looks a bit random.
The parkour is also a concern. Overall, it feels like a lot of fake variation (using random jumps to make it varied that don't make sense with your build.) This thread might help you out with that https://manacube.com/threads/basics-parkour-variance-and-self-constraint.78459/
If you are unsure of what I mean, this section of your map is the biggest example of it:
There are also a few jumps that are a concern and they will be mentioned below.
Make this jump possible without having to bounce off the wall.
This is a skip, you can go straight to the piston.
You have until one month from now (September 12th) to make these changes. If I have not been contacted about changes by this time, your map will automatically be rejected.
