Rejected BedPK

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the jumps are too repetitive and the theme is unorignal
 
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I'm going to give this a -1.

The theme is not original as we have already maps based around that.If you really wish to make a bed try finding a more unique one,from a game or a character.
The parkour is a bit repetitive,and 61 jumps are a bit too many jumps for a medium.Try of thinking more varience in your jumps,as well as making the map playable,with enough space and no barriers everywhere.

This doesn't mean i'm fully correct,judges can tell. Just saying my opinion
 

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Hello!

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is ok, we don't have any maps based on a Minecraft bed, but it would be counted as 3D pixel art.

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The map is entirely made up of 3D pixel art and floating parkour, which is no longer accepted on ManaCube. Next time try considering creating one large main build with lots of depth and detail.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a easy map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps and ladders. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc. I highly recommend looking at some recently accepted maps to see what we are going for.

I also recommend looking through the wiki on map making to learn how to do checkpoints!

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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