Rejected Bête Noire - Glitchtale by LennyTheSniper

[LennyTheSniper]

/plot v LennyTheSniper 1
Easy for sure
If you haven't yet watched Glitchtale watch it now, you wont regret it :)
Also I tried not doing Mario for once and I suck at organics sooooo yeah...

 

[Sonic_Raptor]

How many jumps does it have?

 

[LennyTheSniper]

There is 29 jumps. I may add more if you wish

 

[Presidenten]

Not a bad build, could be better but still good enough
I don't like that all the parkour is floating towards the build, i'd rather want you to make it around the build.
+0 for me, good luck!

 

[LennyTheSniper]

Not a bad build, could be better but still good enough
I don't like that all the parkour is floating towards the build, i'd rather want you to make it around the build.
+0 for me, good luck!

Now 39 Jumps and doesn't go directly to the build.

 

[sapqhire]

Hello LennyTheSniper,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, and the build is good. It is detailed, and I can tell you put a lot of time and effort into it.
The parkour is quite repetitive. You mainly used normal blocks, with a couple added fences/ladders. I would recommend experimenting with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, it will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
Almost all the parkour is floating. Please try to avoid having a lot of jumps floating around the build, obviously it is inevitable that you will have some floating jumps in a map, but having majority of the jumps floating over the void can make the map look messy. Try to incorporate the jumps more into the build.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.