Accepted Charlie Brown

[MCBYT]

Username: MCBYT
Map Name: "Charlie Brown"
/plot h MCBYT 3
Medium map.
35 jumps.

http://imgur.com/a/dY5wltk

(yes i know the hands are bad, i promise i'll get better at it some day)​

 

[curtis]

Again this is a cool map, great variety in the parkour and some cool jumps. I did get lost in some parts, and I found a skip.

Not sure where to go after this, I assume onto the head, but I didn't see any way up


This minecart area is pretty problematic, you are able to jump up onto the shoulders, skipping the next few jumps. It looks like you wanted me to jump onto the slimeblock and then to the fence, but the slimeblock can also be skipped because the fence after the slimeblock can be jumped to directly from the first.


Not a major issue, but I missed the sign here and jumped onto the slimeblock instead. Since the slimeblock doesn't serve much of a purpose as is, I recommend removing it

Hope this helps :)

 

[MCBYT]

Again this is a cool map, great variety in the parkour and some cool jumps. I did get lost in some parts, and I found a skip.
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Not sure where to go after this, I assume onto the head, but I didn't see any way up

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This minecart area is pretty problematic, you are able to jump up onto the shoulders, skipping the next few jumps. It looks like you wanted me to jump onto the slimeblock and then to the fence, but the slimeblock can also be skipped because the fence after the slimeblock can be jumped to directly from the first.

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Not a major issue, but I missed the sign here and jumped onto the slimeblock instead. Since the slimeblock doesn't serve much of a purpose as is, I recommend removing it

Hope this helps :)

1. The carpet teleports you up to the other cyan carpets near the top :)
2. For me, the minecart places you midair after exiting. If it's bugging out for others, I can add barriers around the fences.
3. Will add barriers there

 

[curtis]

Oh, I didn't realize you were supposed to fall from the minecart immediately after exiting. Guests to your plot can't enter minecarts. Or at least I can't

 

[Tas]

This isn't one of your better builds, in my opinion. His head is unnaturally spherical (I know it's like that in the comics) and his neck and shoulder area is very strange-looking. I think you should consider making a bigger build so that everything isn't so polar and sharp. Good luck!

 

[MCBYT]

This isn't one of your better builds, in my opinion. His head is unnaturally spherical (I know it's like that in the comics) and his neck and shoulder area is very strange-looking. I think you should consider making a bigger build so that everything isn't so polar and sharp. Good luck!

I'm planning on leaving the head as is, but I agree on the shoulder area. Going to try to work on that a bit when I get a chance :)

 

[sapqhire]

Hello MCBYT,

I'm happy to tell you, your map is being Accepted!
The theme is original, and the build is good. It is very accurate to the character, so well done!
The parkour isn't too repetitive, you used a nice variety of blocks and items, making the map enjoyable. You also implemented the jumps into the map very well, as there were minimal floating jumps.
There were a couple confusing sections, so I added a sign to make it more clear at the minecart area. I can show you this in-game or send you a screenshot if you would like to see where I put it.
The length and difficulty are good for a medium map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.