Rejected Cheerleader - Hard

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G’day Relishh,

I’m sorry to inform you that your map has been rejected.

There is no map with the theme cheerleader, so good job on that.

The build has some issues as well. The shaping of the organic is very wonky because of the cylindrical limbs and lack of joints. In addition, the pom poms look like the cheerleaders hands as there is no transition between the arms and the pom poms.

The main problem of the map was the parkour. The parkour was extremely inconsistent and repetitive. For example, the first checkpoint is extremely long and difficult in comparison to the rest (such as the kyrohs and the jump 1st cp on the purple carpets), while other checkpoints have jumps that are too easy for a hard map. There would also be long sections with ladder parkour and repeated jumps. In addition, there were a lot of random blocks thrown into the parkour such as enchantment tables and cakes. The presence of the barriers is also excessive, which displays poor pathing.

Thanks for the submission and I hope that I can see more maps from you in the future! (and ty to ateplant for the message !)
 
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