- Username: Hira
- Map name: Cybertruck
- Photos of your Parkour: https://prnt.sc/q1wzqf
- The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: My 3rd plot - /plot h Hira 3
- Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane): Hard
- Number of jumps (Optional): Around 70
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The parkour is mostly nice, although I do feel there's a few jumps that are significantly harder than others (e.g the iron bar corner jump at the beginning and the triple nelo at the end). Otherwise, it's fun, varied, and suitably difficulty/long for a hard.
The build is good in terms of shape, but as mentioned, the color palette is not the greatest. I think it would also be very nice if you added more interior design as you can see through the glass; maybe just some seats, or a radio if you'd like, as opposed to just an empty space.
The theme of cars has been done quite a few times before, though, so I wouldn't say it's particularly original although there aren't any cybertruck/Tesla maps.
+0.5, good luck!
Keep in mind, I am not an official map judge; take my review as that of a normal member of the community <3
The build is good in terms of shape, but as mentioned, the color palette is not the greatest. I think it would also be very nice if you added more interior design as you can see through the glass; maybe just some seats, or a radio if you'd like, as opposed to just an empty space.
The theme of cars has been done quite a few times before, though, so I wouldn't say it's particularly original although there aren't any cybertruck/Tesla maps.
+0.5, good luck!
Keep in mind, I am not an official map judge; take my review as that of a normal member of the community <3
Hello Hira,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't very original, as there are a lot of car themed maps, none with this exact theme however. Please read over the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build is accurate to what you were going for, but it is quite blocky, and not that attractive. Like other people have mentioned above, I would suggest using a larger block variety in the build, since having majority of the build one colour of wool, makes the build look quite plain and unattractive.
The parkour is good, you used a good variety of blocks and items in your jumps, there are a couple slightly repetitive sections, but overall the parkour is well varied and enjoyable, so well done!
The length and difficulty are good for a hard map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't very original, as there are a lot of car themed maps, none with this exact theme however. Please read over the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build is accurate to what you were going for, but it is quite blocky, and not that attractive. Like other people have mentioned above, I would suggest using a larger block variety in the build, since having majority of the build one colour of wool, makes the build look quite plain and unattractive.
The parkour is good, you used a good variety of blocks and items in your jumps, there are a couple slightly repetitive sections, but overall the parkour is well varied and enjoyable, so well done!
The length and difficulty are good for a hard map.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
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