Rejected Enchanted (hard)

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Plot owner: diamondpic
Plot number: -4:86
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Created by: diamondpic, JonArcher

Map name:
Enchanted

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Difficulty:
Normal/Hard

# Of jumps:
95~
 
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-1 Theme is unoriginal
 

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Hello diamondpic & JonArcher,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are many maps already to do with minecraft and minecraft items, as well as a very similar enchanting table map (Enchanted - Medium) Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build isn't bad, it does feel a little blocky, obviously considering it's an enchantment table, but it is accurate and built well.
The parkour is very repetitive. You did use a pretty good variety of jumps throughout the map, however you did group a lot of them. What I mean by this, is that you would have a sequence of just fence jumps, then just heads, then just soul sand etc. Try to mix up your jumps a bit more and avoid grouping where possible as this can make your map quite boring.
The parkour is implemented into the build quite well, it does float a bit inside of the build, but from the outside it doesn't look too messy which is good.
The difficulty varies between a medium and a hard map, and the difficulty is a bit long. Please read over this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ to make sure your map fits within the requirements.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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