Hey twistedspindle,
I'm sorry to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED. The theme is not very original, as there are multiple floating islands/biomes maps already accepted and this build does not bring anything relatively fresh and new to exempt it from this. The build is fairly decent, but, is greatly hindered by the floating parkour. The PK difficulty fit the easy difficulty but the length did not (having well over 50 jumps). The PK was also very linear and lacked variation in jumps/blocks used, making it not an incredibly entertaining experience. Also, the PK got rather confusing on the second island (how do you enter the house, if that's the way to go?). Still, I see potential. I hope to see more maps from you in the future! :)