Rejected Fred Flintstone

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+0.5 The Theme is original, but I don’t love the build, it’s super awkward in my opinion. I love the parkour, you incorporated the theme quite nicely in my opinion. The jumps are varied, and well suit the difficulty of the map.

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Once again, good theme and parkour but the build is so small.. you should really consider larger builds so that you can add more details and have more room for variation.
 

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Once again, good theme and parkour but the build is so small.. you should really consider larger builds so that you can add more details and have more room for variation.
I'm working on some larger maps right now (1 of which should be finished today, hopefully), I just wanted to cool down from Chun-Li as I said before. I think maps that size are a bit above my paygrade.
 

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Hello MCBYT,

I regret to inform you that your map has been rejected.
The theme is original, as we don't have any maps relating to The Flintstones, so good job on that!
The build is the main concern. While it is accurate to the original thing, and I can tell that you put a lot of effort into it, it just appears unattractive. I have to agree with some of the above comments that the build would be more attractive if it was bigger. I understand that big builds can be challenging, but they fit certain themes better (such as characters, which it seems you specialize in.)
The parkour was varied throughout the whole map, so good job on that! It also fits the difficulty quite nicely!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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