Rejected Grand Staircase - Easy

[GamePark1346603]

Grand Staircase - Easy Map by GamePark1346603
BY THE WAY its plot 2
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[GamePark1346603]

aynone seen dis yet?

 

[sophiaaah <3]

-1

-theres no main build
-the parkour is repatitive
- i dont there are are enough jumps

 

[BinLicker]

Stair case looks pretty grand to me

 

[sophiaaah <3]

Stair case looks pretty grand to me

true but does the grand look staircase?

 

[GamePark1346603]

At least I tried my best I have submitted before and dis is quite good

 

[Blurpyfied]

-1

-theres no main build
-the parkour is repatitive
- i dont there are are enough jumps

repetitive

 

[sophiaaah <3]

repetitive

o oops my bad

 

[Elly_x]

Hello,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is unoriginal, as we already have maps based around stairs. The theme is also something that could be worked on, try a character from your favorite video game or a scene from your favorite movie.

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The map is entirely made of up minecraft stairs. I would have loved to see some details. Next time try making one main build with lots of depth and detail. A way to spruce this map up could be enlarging the idea and adding lots of detailing and shaping to it!

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a easy map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps and ladders. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly