Hello Knifepig23, I am sorry to say your map is being rejected.
Theme: The them is unoriginal, we have a lot of village/village themed maps already.
Build: The build isn't very attractive, and could be better. try playing around with more 3d shapes and different patterns/textures throughout your build.
Parkour: The parkour was very easy and basic. It was too repetitive to be fun.
Please read the submission guide before making a map
https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
Thanks for taking the time to submit your map, hopefully, you will submit more in the future!
Have a good day, and happy map building- Cele <3