Wassup GamersDecision,
I tried out your map, and it was pretty fun. However there are some flaws that need to be addressed:
》The first thing I noticed when I tp'd to your map was the amount of barriers. I feel like covering the entire map with it is unnecessary, and map judges don't really like to see that many.
》When going through the parkour, a good chunk of it was jumps that are too hard to be deemed eligible for a hard map (such as the neup). I recommend nerfing some of those jumps.
》You have a few repeating and floating jumps (water jumps mostly), maybe try and fix those up a bit.
》I noticed a skip in your map; On the jump where you say "Oh, and go around me please" you can jump from the barrier block you're standing on to the barrier block to the left (the one with the sign on it). Please try and fix that up.
》The map isn't really original, but don't be alarmed by this. If you fix up the parkour and the above-listed suggestions, there's still a chance you can get accepted.
I like your build, it gives off a cozy neighborhood vibe. In addition, your movie theater is also pretty nice.
Good luck! If you have any questions lemme know.