Rejected Neon Submission-medium

[Poisonousx]

Map Name: Neon
Plot: /plot v Poisonousx
Map Builder: Poisonousx
Number Of Jumps: 61
Number Of Checkpoints: 5
Difficulty: Medium
Picture Of Map:

 

[EAAgatha]

May i ask- how is that neon? Do you mean neon like the colors?

 

[Poisonousx]

couldn't think of another name and i guess so

 

[EAAgatha]

xD lets see if my signiture works!

 

[BinLicker]

Hi! There are some issues with your map! The build is non existent and is just some coloured cubes. The theme also doesn't match the build and is a bit unoriginal (colours). You should try and come up with an original theme using the list of maps:https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ checking the theme is unique. I would highly recommend looking at /warp beta to see the quality of accepted maps, pay attention to the variance in parkour and the fact that it is against the build. Remember I am not a map judge and I have no overall say in the outcome of the map.
-Bin

 

[Elly_x]

Hello Poisonousx,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The there is no real THEME to your map. Try to create map based around a theme. This theme could be a scene from your favorite movie or a character from your favorite video game.

The BUILD of your map is a problem. There is no main build it is just floating parkour. Try to create one main build with lots of depth and detail that corresponds to your theme.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! Your parkour is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps and neos. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc.

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly