Rejected Nessie - Easy

[IrnBruPancakes]

Map Name: Nessie
Map Theme: Folklore, Loch Ness Monster
Username: IrnBruPancakes
Plot: 2 (/plot tp IrnBruPancakes 2) (Starting coordinates: -20071, 79, 12167)
Difficulty: Easy (24 Jumps, 2 Checkpoints)
Testers:
- TheLegendaryClem
- noobo_
- ItzMarvv__
- Lochness2008
- XxPanda01

Spoiler: Images

 

[sophiaaah <3]

-1

 

[Enowapi]

+1

 

[Blurpyfied]

Hello, i'm going to be giving you a -1

The build isnt the best, check out the more detailed builds manacube is looking for.
The theme is unoriginal in my opinion, because there is some other maps around the goose/duck theme.
The parkour isnt fun either, add more variation than just fences, ladders, normal blocks, and ice. Add soulsand, heads, flowepots, invisible blocks with flowers on top of them, etc.

 

[senatvs]

+1

 

[k_rissy]

Hello IrnBruPancakes,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done there!
The build however, is a bit plain. The surrounding environment is okay, but if your main theme is going to be the creature, it needs several more details throughout to make it stand out.
The parkour has some variation, but there are a few repetitive areas (the fences for example.) Your map needs to be varied throughout! The parkour is also confusing in some areas, so make sure you have a clear path for players to follow. Your parkour does mostly fit an easy map, but there are a few trickier areas.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!