Rejected Progression Parkour -JimmyGG

[JimmyGG]

Hi, this is my first map. I'm not expecting it to get accepted but would like any constructive comments.

ID: -122;-11

It is a 9 jump map but most of the jumps are pretty difficult so I would guess Medium.

A couple photos:

I put a stone pressure plate at the end because I thought that was meant to be how you finish. Thanks!

-JimmyGG

 

[Tsuey]

this map is really small but if you made it bigger , it will be a serious contender for a spot in the game. ovarall i would give it a 5/10

 

[49ersDude]

it's really cool just add 10 more jumps and yeah got a shot.

 

[celestiiia]

Hello JimmyGG, I am sorry to say your map is being rejected.

Theme: There isn't really a theme on your map! Try and be creative and come up with something original to base your build and parkour off of.
Build: The build was rather simplistic and didn't convey any particular theme.
Parkour: The parkour was rather basic, and it could've definitely been better in terms of length.

I'd suggest reading this https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/

Thanks for taking the time to submit your map, hopefully, you will submit more in the future!

Have a good day, and happy map building- Cele <3