Hiya,
Unfortunately, this map is being REJECTED.
The theme is pretty vague, and there are maps with similar concepts done (HeavenVsHell, AdventureInHistory). Try finding an original theme about a character, building, or object!
Maps do need to have a central build. This way, parkour can be incorporated into it, and doesn't look as messy!
The parkour fits the length of a hard map, so well done on that! Some jumps are too hard though, and aren't very enjoyable in 1.8.9. Parkour should also be mixed and try to avoid 'stages' and repetitiveness.
We hope to see more submissions from you in the future!
- Amy