Rejected Rhythm Games (Hard)

[Skidooskei]

Username: Skidooskei
Map name: Rhythm Games
The # of your Plot: (-56:-77)
Difficulty: Hard
Number of jumps: Around 71
Checkpoints: 6
As well jumping on notes, this parkour is mainly based around music games such as Dance Dance Revolution, Osu!, and Taiko no Tatsujin. This is my first map, and I could probably do better, but I wanted to give this one a shot! I also just made this myself and weren't any helpers.

 

[Tas]

It's a good theme but it's recommended to have one main build instead of a number of smaller floating builds. Good luck!

 

[MCBYT]

Adding on to what's above, a fair amount of the builds are flat and "pixel art-y", which isn't allowed anymore, and the parkour is a bit repetitive (try to spruce it up with some ice, soul sand, trapdoors, fences, etc!)

 

[Dubinzi]

Giving this a +0

Positives:

• Original theme
• Creative use of the rhythm games, especially DDR

Negatives:

• Very pixel-art-y
• Not much jump variation, lots of regular block jumps
• Random builds

Suggestions:

• Make more 3D builds as opposed to flat builds
• Vary your jumps using soul sand, ice, fences, heads, etc
• Organize the builds more so it feels less random

Good luck with your level! This is a difficult theme to use, but it can be done!

 

[Skidooskei]

Thanks for all the feedback! I will try to make jumps more varied and the buildings 3d and better looking

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Skidooskei,

Unfortunately I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, however the build isn't great. The build is based around multiple small pixel arts, try to make the build more 3d, with more shape and depth.
The parkour doesn't have much variation, you mainly used normal blocks and ladders. Try to experiment with a larger number of blocks and items when building jumps, it will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
The difficulty is good for a medium map, and the length is good for a hard map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.