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Hey,
Sorry to tell you that your map has been rejected.
The theme is fine, we already have "Despicable Me" maps but nothing like that, the build is kinda off, the build is quite disproportionate compared to the actual ray gun ; the handles are way too thick, the back of the gun is way too big mostly the black part), the handle at the front could be more angled, the very front sticks out too much and should be more round, the font for sr-6 could be a tiny bit better and the front half should be a bit shorter but larger.
The parkour also needs improvement there is a lot of 3+1 in your map which makes the map a bit boring, it's also a bit unbalanced, and some jumps are quite annoying to do (example, the black glass neo with black concrete in the background, which makes it super hard to see).
Thanks for submitting your map.
Sorry to tell you that your map has been rejected.
The theme is fine, we already have "Despicable Me" maps but nothing like that, the build is kinda off, the build is quite disproportionate compared to the actual ray gun ; the handles are way too thick, the back of the gun is way too big mostly the black part), the handle at the front could be more angled, the very front sticks out too much and should be more round, the font for sr-6 could be a tiny bit better and the front half should be a bit shorter but larger.
The parkour also needs improvement there is a lot of 3+1 in your map which makes the map a bit boring, it's also a bit unbalanced, and some jumps are quite annoying to do (example, the black glass neo with black concrete in the background, which makes it super hard to see).
Thanks for submitting your map.
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