Rejected strawberry

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sapqhire

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Hello liviOlive,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is somewhat original, there are a few fruit themed maps, but none of just strawberries which is good. The build itself is good, it's accurate and has been built well, however I would recommend trying to have a larger scale build that you can incorporate more of the parkour into, as having most of the parkour floating around it does take away from the main build.

The parkour is quite repetitive. You had a few different jump styles which is good, however as they were grouped together it felt really repetitive. What I mean by this, is you would have a sequence of just regular blocks, then just heads etc. Try to mix up your jumps a bit more, as well as experimenting with different blocks and items when building parkour, as this makes your map more fun to complete.

Also, please try to include all the info listed in the map submission format here - having info like the plot number and the map difficulty can be helpful when people are testing your map :)

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future
 
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