Hello puntballer,
I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.
There really isn't a THEME to your map. Make sure you create a map around a base theme. The theme could be a character from your favorite video game or a scene from your favorite movie.
The BUILD of your map is a problem. There really isn't a main build, it is just floating blocks. Next time try considering creating one main build with lots of depth and detail.
The PARKOUR is lacking variance, only things that are incorporated are regular jumps, slabs, and slimes. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc. The length and difficulty would fit better under a hard map through.
Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
Elly