Rejected Surf Time - Medium

[PineappleRyann]

• PineappleRyann
• Map name = Surf Time
• 19;71 or /plot visit PineappleRyann 3
• Medium
• (tell me if you liked the build, I had second thoughts about it)
• Number of jumps = 52, 3 Checkpoints
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[MCBYT]

+1. The build looks very nice to me (nice shaders too, by the way), and the parkour is fitting in terms of difficulty/length. There's already a map focusing on sea waves, but not with a surfboard, so this should be original enough to pass. Good luck!

 

[Tas]

Can't think of a reason for this to be rejected. Good luck

 

[PineappleRyann]

+1. The build looks very nice to me (nice shaders too, by the way), and the parkour is fitting in terms of difficulty/length. There's already a map focusing on sea waves, but not with a surfboard, so this should be original enough to pass. Good luck!

Thank you!

 

[PineappleRyann]

Can't think of a reason for this to be rejected. Good luck

Thanks!!

 

[IPattyI]

Hey PineappleRyann,

I'm sorry to have to tell you that your map has been REJECTED. Although there are many maps whose themes revolve around the ocean, waves, etc. there hasn't been any map that takes your surfboard + wave approach, which makes this original, well done! The issues mostly pertain to the build and parkour. The build itself is not very attractive and is quite messy (messiness due to the Parkour). The PK difficulty and length fit the medium difficulty, but, there are issues with the variation and placement. The PK has many floating jumps and repetitive jumps/segments (ex: headhitters and heads). Furthermore, the placement of jumps on the surfboard and excessive floating jumps make the overall build messy. I hope to see more maps from you in the future (don't get discouraged, please! <3).

p.s There was a lil skip right here:

http://imgur.com/r9pf47f