Rejected Technoblade Resub ~ Insane

[Blurpyfied]

Made By: Blurpyfied
Helpers: fribe,caseyclosed,ImArrow,n8thn,sophiaaah
/plot v Blurpyfied 18
Jumps:175
Checkpoints: 15

 

[sophiaaah <3]

FIX THE HAND HOLDING THE AXE

 

[sophiaaah <3]

his hand is wrapped around it like a snake

he has no fingers

im aware that its a hand holding the axe but if its gonna go around like that it keeps some indication wether its the shape or the cutoff of the fingers

 

[WICKEDMagma]

I will be giving this a -1.

The build, overall looks nices, but just doesnt feel executed well. The parkour just wasnt it, I didnt have as much fun, and it felt repetitive mostly, because of the corner jumps and neo's it has in it. The parkour also felt rushed.

 

[Arc4Fer]

+1
Seems cool ! GoodLuck !

 

[Anacoustic]

Hi Noah,

I regret to inform you your map has been rejected.

The theme is original so good job on that portion.
The build is quite disproportional. The coat comes too far off the body making the shoulders look extremely bulky. The torso also does not fit with the rest of the limbs, the arms and legs are much too skinny.
The parkour is inconsistent for the most part. For example, the first jump after the leap is a simple door glitch into an extremely easy minecart + 1 block head --> fence jump then a really easy anvil jump. After that series thats a really hard jump with the anvil --> ladder (with a ladder blocking). This makes the map hard to play and there is a lack of direction and too many headhitters.

Thank you for your submission, have a wonderful day
~Ana