Rejected Twisty Splits - Hard

[VibeVibe]

• Usernames (VibeVibe with help from Dmxracer)
• Map name - Twisty Splits (Subject to change if it does not fit in.)
• Photos of your Parkour (down below)
• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it - /plot v VibeVibe 1
• Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane) HARD
• Number of jumps (Optional) 58 (and 6 checkpoints)

 

[IPattyI]

Hey VibeVibe,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: In all honesty, I really don't think "Twisty Splits" is a good or original theme. We already have multiple maps that take the approach of them being able to be done from two separate paths while also utilizing an original theme. It's not something that we haven't seen before.
• Build: The build is not very good as it's just floating blocks with no proper focus. You executed your idea but the build is just lacking in every other department. The entire build is just stone and ender themed, it's not pretty or original. You have to try a little harder.
• Parkour: The PK was definitely long enough for a hard but it felt way too easy and the checkpoints only added onto that. You should buff the jumps on the map. Furthermore, I felt that the parkour was very repetitive to do as you utilized the same types of jumps many times (for example, the lots and lots of ladder jumps).

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck!