Rejected Petscop

[MCBYT]

Username: MCBYT
Map Name: "Petscop"
/plot h MCBYT 3
Medium map.
32 jumps.

http://imgur.com/a/NROcnJd

Characters (left to right): Roneth, Player Character (also known as Naul/Newmaker), Amber​

 

[MrBugs]

I just want to say I love this build it’s so cute!! Edit: The parkour slaps, it’s varied and good for a medium!! Good luck <3

 

[Tas]

I'm not familiar with the theme but the build seems kind of plain and rushed, and there isn't much of a main build. If I can give a quick suggestion without overstepping, I think you should consider spending a longer period of time on a map to make it the best you can, rather than firing off a quick medium course every day.

 

[MCBYT]

I'm not familiar with the theme but the build seems kind of plain and rushed, and there isn't much of a main build. If I can give a quick suggestion without overstepping, I think you should consider spending a longer period of time on a map to make it the best you can, rather than firing off a quick medium course every day.

The build isn't meant to be singular; originally, it was just going to be the middle character, but I added the other two because I didn't think there was enough build/parkour. I'm not really trying to rush maps, I've just been doing some shorter and easier ones to cool down from Chun Li (and also because after this, I have about 5-10 experts/insanes to do and a champion or two to start on). It's not overstepping, at least to me, as long as you keep the critcism constructive.

I just want to say I love this build it’s so cute!!! I’ll be on later to do the parkour and I’ll edit

<33 Glad you like it!

 

[curtis]

Cool map like always. Like Tasses said, it doesn't look as good as your other builds, but it seems worthy enough to be accepted. In my opinion, the map is too hard for a medium, in particular, the beginning up until after the ice block, and the water to flower pot jump later on.

I wasn't able to do this jump in particular


It seems like you could reach that minecart when you're at the water part, skipping a few jumps

 

[k_rissy]

Hello MCBYT,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
I believe the theme is original, as I haven't seen any maps relating to this (even though I have no idea what the game is, oops) so good job on that!
The build is good and it is decently accurate to the original thing, so good job on that! However, I do agree with an above comment that it might be better if it was focused on one build, because with this particular map, it feels like we don't get fully "acquainted" with each of the characters.
The parkour is the main concern here. It is too hard in certain spaces to be a medium map (for example, the cross neo and momentum jump to the slime are a bit challenging.) It also would have been nice to see the parkour be incorporated with the theme. That being said, the jumps had a good amount of variety, so good job on that!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina