Rejected Atari 2600 - Expert

[rah]

creator: rah
map name: Atari 2600 [1.12 build]
location: /plot v rah 4
difficulty: expert
jumps/checkpoints: 85/8
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reference: click here

 

[k_rissy]

Hello rah,

Your map will now be marked as ongoing; I have reviewed your map and it will now be discussed among map judges. This may take time, so please be patient.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello rah,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, well done there.
The build is a concern. The interior needs more detailing throughout; overall there's not enough texturing done and the cables look more like chains.
The parkour is the other concern;
-The ceiling interferes with two things; Jumps are hard because of 3bcs that are hard to see. (barriers/black ceiling) Also make sure that the ceilings don't force headhitters too much.
-The pathing also needs to be heavily altered to reduce the amount of barriers.
Overall, a significant parkour rework is wanted, as well as interior detailing.
There will be some examples of what we want altered below:

Spoiler: Jumps

The starting platform could be moved further back and the slime could start you at a lower point on the table.

Having 2 tricky vine jumps at the end of a checkpoint isn't the best idea here.

This jump needs to be nerfed.

This is an example of the ceiling being difficult to see.

The barriers make this deceivingly hard+not clear where to go.

Another barrier ceiling example.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!