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Loading Status...Rejected Baby Bottle - Easy
- Thread starter Llighty
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The theme has been done before sorta, we have similar maps like Mug or Vase.
The build on this one looks a bit similar to Vase, the main difference being the shape. Very small as well, I think a bit more detail would be nice.
The parkour on this, though, is very fun and varied! It suits an easy well.
I found a skip here:
You can go directly from the wall to the head, skipping 5 jumps.
Overall, I'll give this a +0. There's not much you can do about the theme, but a bigger build would help on that front. Good luck!
Keep in mind, I am not an official map judge; take my review as that of a normal member of the community <3
The build on this one looks a bit similar to Vase, the main difference being the shape. Very small as well, I think a bit more detail would be nice.
The parkour on this, though, is very fun and varied! It suits an easy well.
I found a skip here:
Overall, I'll give this a +0. There's not much you can do about the theme, but a bigger build would help on that front. Good luck!
Keep in mind, I am not an official map judge; take my review as that of a normal member of the community <3
Hello,
Unfortunately, I'll be rejecting your map due to the following reasons; firstly, the theme is not very original as we already have a few maps and similar builds revolving around water bottles, the build is decent, but can easily be improved, I also found it slightly too small as the parkour made it look messy. The parkour and length definitely fit the difficulty you're going for, and the parkour was well varied, but as I said above it made the build look messy and slightly unattractive.
In the future when submitting maps, please refer to the thread listed below to prevent having unoriginal builds / themes. I'd also recommend making your builds slightly larger, and add more variety in blocks rather than sticking to a few blocks.
Map list (With theme) : https://www.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
Thank you for taking the time to create, and submit this map to the forums as well as being patient while we reviewed your map, I look forward to hopefully seeing more from you in the future!
Luci
Unfortunately, I'll be rejecting your map due to the following reasons; firstly, the theme is not very original as we already have a few maps and similar builds revolving around water bottles, the build is decent, but can easily be improved, I also found it slightly too small as the parkour made it look messy. The parkour and length definitely fit the difficulty you're going for, and the parkour was well varied, but as I said above it made the build look messy and slightly unattractive.
In the future when submitting maps, please refer to the thread listed below to prevent having unoriginal builds / themes. I'd also recommend making your builds slightly larger, and add more variety in blocks rather than sticking to a few blocks.
Map list (With theme) : https://www.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
Thank you for taking the time to create, and submit this map to the forums as well as being patient while we reviewed your map, I look forward to hopefully seeing more from you in the future!
Luci
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