Hello Gregthebag,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
Firstly, as mentioned above, please use our proper map format, as if you do not use this in the future your submission may be closed.
The theme is
unoriginal as we already have two maps with the same theme (
BattleBus,
BattleBusPK.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here and clicking the google doc in the thread:
https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build is
decently accurate to what you were going for; however, there could be
some more details added throughout to make this look more attractive. It was also bigger than it needed to be.
The parkour is very
repetitive throughout, so
be sure to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! This may include; water, lava, vines, flower pots, and many more different types of jumps depending on your theme! The length of this course is okay for a hard map, but the difficulty of the map overall is
too easy.
Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina