Hey slangier,
I am putting this map into
reviewing. This means that the map has been judged and
has a lot of GOOD aspects to it, but there are
significant enough problems with the map that it cannot be accepted right away.
Please make the changes discussed below before July 14th, 2020, and message me either in-game, or on Discord @ Quinny#2316 when it's ready!
The theme for the build is
great. Despite another crane map existing (CoalCrane) this map does look
significantly different and more
realistic, rather than smaller, cartoony nature of the existing map. Good work! The build itself is also
very cool. It
accurately depicts a large crane. It's clear that you put
a lot of effort into this build.
The parkour is where the main problems are with this map. I think that the parkour on this map is better than your Freight map, but it
could still be more mixed and varied.
Parts of the map like this are not mixed or varied at all. This leads to
very repetitive bits of the map that aren't very fun. If you need suggestions or ideas on how to scale walls, let me know, or talk to casey (caseyclosed). He's very good at making difficult but interesting parkour! The overall
difficulty of the map could also be reduced a bit as well.
Thank you for submitting this map! If you have any questions about the changes necessary to have this map be accepted, please feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game, or preferably Discord.