Accepted Dragonsreach - Insane

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Map Builder: Zaba | Parkour Builder: BluePottwal
Map Name: Dragonsreach
Jumps: 88 I think
CPs: 6, 7 with regrab
Plot: /plot v Zaba 3
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This build looks SO GOOD but damn idk if this will be too similar to other castle builds... I wish this build the best of luck!
 

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Hello Zaba and Bluepottwal,

I will be putting your map into ONGOING. Please be patient as I discuss your map with the map judging team. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to message me on discord jacobsfunparty#0486.

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Hi,

So sorry for the late response this has not been forgotten!

Your map will be going into REVIEWING

The theme is original so GG

The build is accurate to the theme and pretty solid. The exterior could use a bit of work. The vibe of the map could be improved to give more of a high up in the sky feel that would be more accurate to the theme. This can be improved by blending the stone 'chunks' into the build with both texturing and levelling. Also, have vines hanging off them and a 'cloud' feel with cobwebs perhaps. The entrance to the building looks a little unfinished and is a bit bare. Try to redecorate a bit more so it fits in more properly. Solid execution though overall on the build.

The parkour was overall very solid and fun to play. Just a few spots the judges thought needed balancing.

CP1: the slime is hard to get the height on so nerf.
CP3: replace pane with head for easier turn

nerf landing a bit

CP4: This carpet is a bit harsh so either nerf or change jump

CP5: This chain can be buffed a bit.
make this part semi fs back to inside

nerf last jump a tad

You will have one month from now (until the 23rd of Feb) to make these changes or your map will be rejected. Do not hesitate to message me for further help. Thank you for submitting a map. Good luck with future submissions. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to message me on discord jacobsfunparty#0486.

Thanks,
Jacob
 

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Hello,

Your map has (finally) been ACCEPTED

The theme is original so GG

The build is very well done it is very accurate to the theme and has good detailing and texture. Thank you for making the slight changes to the build it is much appreciated.

The parkour fits the length of the difficulty and has good jump variation. Thank you as well for making the necessary changes requested by the judges.

Thank you for submitting a map. Good luck with future submissions. If you have any questions or concerns feel free to message me on discord jacobsfunparty#0486.

Thanks,
Jacob
 
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