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Loading Status...Rejected [DROPPER] The Octopus
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Hello,
Giving this a 0
Theme: Unoriginal, there is already an octopus dropper on the hard difficulty.
The build: IMO, it needs work, there's too much going on, and the world edit looking spheres, just don't look good, it looks and feels very messy.
The Slimes were very hard to find without knowing which hole to go through. the 1 by 1 slimes just werent great. The ending location should be near the slimes, and very easy to find.
Also since this is a medium, you need a yellow wool block under the pressure plate.
Giving this a 0
Theme: Unoriginal, there is already an octopus dropper on the hard difficulty.
The build: IMO, it needs work, there's too much going on, and the world edit looking spheres, just don't look good, it looks and feels very messy.
The Slimes were very hard to find without knowing which hole to go through. the 1 by 1 slimes just werent great. The ending location should be near the slimes, and very easy to find.
Also since this is a medium, you need a yellow wool block under the pressure plate.
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The head of the octopus is great but the tentacles need alot of work. like noah said theres alot of world edit spheres so it needs to be smoothed out. Octopuses don't have bones so their tentacles should be smooth looking and flow well but they dont in your build. this is just a personal preference but cutting off the end of the tentacles was kinda a waste, it could've made the build look more full. The randomized blocks for the wall and terrain are also kinda messy looking. The bottom should also be smoothed out. The random stuff in the air is also kinda unnecessary, Typically plants in the ocean grow from the floor.
Hiya,
Unfortunately, this dropper is being REJECTED.
The theme is unoriginal as there are already some oceanic themed droppers, as well as ones that feature an octopus (Whirlwind).
As mentioned above, the build could use some improvements. The tentacles are too spherical and not smoothed out, and feel a bit messy and all over the place. This could be improved by shrinking the area, or creating different types of obstacles, the fish and bubbles are good!
This dropper felt much harder than a medium, more towards hard/expert difficulty, due to the amount of obstacles to dodge and the very small landing spots.
I recommend reading this wiki article on dropper difficulties to help know what aim for! Creating Dropper Maps | ManaCube Official Wiki
We hope to see more submissions from you in the future!
- Amy
Unfortunately, this dropper is being REJECTED.
The theme is unoriginal as there are already some oceanic themed droppers, as well as ones that feature an octopus (Whirlwind).
As mentioned above, the build could use some improvements. The tentacles are too spherical and not smoothed out, and feel a bit messy and all over the place. This could be improved by shrinking the area, or creating different types of obstacles, the fish and bubbles are good!
This dropper felt much harder than a medium, more towards hard/expert difficulty, due to the amount of obstacles to dodge and the very small landing spots.
I recommend reading this wiki article on dropper difficulties to help know what aim for! Creating Dropper Maps | ManaCube Official Wiki
We hope to see more submissions from you in the future!
- Amy
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