Rejected I have a map to submit

[izzzyyy_]

This is OhNo_ThatsMe and I have a map to submit . it is called Lost At Sea and its a medium map. It was created by me. so yeah, thats it. Try to judge it and I hope it becomes a future parkour map!

 

[MCBYT]

https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/

 

[Dubinzi]

Ignoring the failure to use the format, here's my review:
Giving this a -1
Negatives:

• No block variation
• Very little jump variation
• All of the difficult jumps can be skipped
• Theme is unoriginal
• It does not look like a sea, it looks like assorted floating blue wool blocks

Usually here I would suggest how to fix these issues, but the issues are so abundant that I suggest scrapping this map and making a different one. The main reason I suggest this is due to the theme, which is unoriginal.

So, here's some advice for any future maps you choose to make:

• Pick a better theme that people can connect with more. The sea / sea life theme is overused. For themes you could recreate areas or characters from other games you like, create interesting architecture and recreations of real life buildings, or just pick a random object... like shaving cream, for example.
• Make your jumps more interesting. Try not to have 3 similar jumps (For example, ladder towers) in a row so that you don't make the player bored. The best blocks (in my opinion) to use are iron bars, glass panes, soul sand, ice, fences, heads, and trapdoors.
• Add more detail to your course to make it feel more like an environment instead of floating blocks
• Avoid floating jumps. Although some of the older courses on the server have floating jumps, the standards have increased since then. This is not to say you should never use floating jumps, just that you should avoid them as much as possible.

Good luck with any courses you submit in the future!

 

[izzzyyy_]

So I am changing the map and the name, the name is going to be Everything is Blue (thats a song) and its going to be just every blue blocks I find in the creative inventory. I found a way to get barrier blocks, so I am editing the map so much that it will look so different then scattered blue wool . Thank you for telling me how 2 improve:)

 

[Shinxray]

Hoi OhNo_ThatsMe,
I'm gonna close your submission because I can't found your map, please be sure to add the correct coords/plot next time ! (And please follow the format like MCBYT gave you)