Rejected Parkour 3 : Normal Skyblock - Hard

[ChocFRANK]

Hi Sir/Miss, I'm ChocFRSNK! I hope you're having a good morning. So, this is My Parkour: Normal Skyblock. The plot # is -39;-141 . The difficulty is Hard, with 61 jumps and 2 Checkpoint: at the beggining and at the middle. I hope everybody will like it and I also hope that the judges will love it. Good afternoon everyone. Hope to see you soon.

Ps; If xDacon, CullanP, Roree, ChocBar or any high graded Staff are reading this, I,ve got a Museum on the Skyblock Server for every Staff Members Head. Go take a look /warps Museum I'm sure you'll love it :). if any Staff members that I don't have in my Museum are reading this, it apply to you too ;) Also, you can dm me on Discord chocfrank

-ChocFRANK, the 2nd biggest fan of ManaCube Staff Members.

 

[tuy910]

Hello ChocFrank , please read the other replies i have left because they also apply to this map. Design is a little bit lacking , parkour is repetitive and cheesable and what the hell does a 2block neo do in an easy/med map lol. Please read this: https://manacube.com/threads/basics-series-1-a-guide-on-how-to-make-parkour.79093/

 

[Hayleyx]

Hello!

Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED.
The theme itself is extremely hard to execute in an original way, as we already have so many floating island maps that look extremely similar. It unfortunately isn't original enough.

The build itself sadly lacks a lot of texture/depth/detailing. I would suggest building one main island/build so that you can add more depth overall. You can do things such as layering the island. You will also then be able to path your parkour better with less floating jumps!

The parkour itself is repetitive as mentioned above. You seem to have an easy end pressure plate. Be sure to have red wool rather than green for an easy map! The parkour was far too easy for the most part, with some harder jumps thrown in. Be sure to make your parkour consistent!

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley